the bar charts illustrate the proportion of boys and girls aged 5-14
who took part in cultural and sporting activities held in 2003 in Australia
Overall, in terms of sports, it appears that more boy participated
in such activities than girls. As for four cultural activities,
what stands out is that an almost equal percentage of participants
of both gender joined drama and singing while the female participation
the rate in dancing was significantly higher than that of their male counterparts.
Also of note is that more boys opted to play musical instruments than girls.
Looking at the details, it is clear that marginally more female children
participated in drama and singing than male ones (at roughly 5%). The biggest
difference in participation rate could be seen in dancing with exactly
25% of girls doing this activity as opposed to 3% of boys. With regard to playing instruments, the proportion of girls who joined this activity
was two-thirds that of boys, with 10% and 15% respectively.
With respect to sport, about half of the girls got involved in
this which was moderately lower than the percentage of boys who took part in
physical activities, at precisely 70%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, third, while, as for, with regard to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 197.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15736040609 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86132365845 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568527918782 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7347880046 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.142857143 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1428571429 22.9334400587 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 3.83414634146 417% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182276506454 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832972107332 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696336906045 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0593003448733 0.15604864568 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0574072985294 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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