Greenhouse gases

Essay topics:

Greenhouse gases

The first chart represents the different types of energy use in Australian houses. The second graph demonstrates the amount of greenhouse gas which is generated for usage of this energy.

It can obviously be seen that cooling has got the least amount of use and gas emissions into the atmosphere. On the other hand, heating facilities are the most portion of energy use in Australia.

In spite of the maximum number of 42 per cent for heating systems, they have less greenhouse gas emissions which are 15 per cent. It is seen that the number of gas emissions for lighting and refrigeration uses is twice the percentage of use. The first chart shows the numbers 4 and 7 per cent for lighting and refrigeration use, respectively. In addition, the per cent number of emissions are 8 and 14 for the mentioned items.

Another use of energy relates to water heating, which has an approximate balance in two charts by 30 and 32 per cent for use and gas generation. In emission graph, other applications with 28 per cent are the second generator of greenhouse gas after water heating systems. Cooling has the minimum household use and greenhouse gas emissions with the units 2 and 3 per cent in these charts.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, in addition, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75308937991 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504761904762 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.0523419961 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.9090909091 112.824112599 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0764245143234 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039085731023 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523280706341 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055568160661 0.15604864568 36% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388311050769 0.0819641961636 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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