Rate of Burglaries

Essay topics:

Rate of Burglaries

The presented figure demonstrates annual rate of the burglary in four European countries between 2000 and 2009. The shown numbers are per thousands, while, Great Britain, Norway, Spain, and the investigated countries.

It is obviously seen that the number of burglaries in Great Britain is more than the others with two peaks 20 per thousands or 2 per cent in the years 2002 and 2006. On the other hand, the least values belong to Norway, and surprisingly, it has constantly been fixed on 5 per thousands for years between 2002 to 2007.

After Norway, the second country with the lowest numbers is Spain, although decreasing trend of this country from 2005 has resulted in the least value of 4 per thousands in 2009 between the other candidates. Spain has the same value with Greece in 2001 which is equal to 3 per thousands.

All these countries do not have a specific rise or fall trend except Greece which has had a gradual increment from 7 to 13 per thousands for a decade. However, it is still 2 per thousands less than the least value in Great Britain which is 15 per thousands.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, still, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69791666667 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55611925773 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7516128697 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 5.23603664747 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835264133696 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490203475672 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100391448988 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0681271457761 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0877491738616 0.0819641961636 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.96 61.2550243902 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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