Export earning

Essay topics:

Export earning

The below pie chart presents the monetary values of a country's exports for five distinct products during 2015 and 2016. The percentage change of each category has also been displayed in a table for comparison between these two years.

The pie chart shows that the value earned from exports has always been more in the year 2016 compared to 2015, except for gems and jewellery which has changed this order. Besides, petroleum products and engineered goods have the most values of export earnings compared to three other products.

In the shown table, the maximum and minimum values of percentage change belong to textiles and Agricultural products. Both products have experienced a rising change by the numbers of 15.24 and just 0.81 per cent. petroleum products with the export earnings more than 60 billions in 2015 and 2016 has the maximum earning. one the other hand, textiles with presented numbers around 20 and 30 billions have placed in the minimum value of the chart.

gems and jewellery show an average value of earning around 40 billions. this product presents a falling trend of 5.18 per cent over one year. In the demonstrated table and after textiles, the second and third units of percentage change dedicate to engineered goods and petroleum products by the numbers of 8.5 and 3 per cent of increment.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Petroleum
...umbers of 15.24 and just 0.81 per cent. petroleum products with the export earnings more ...
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Suggestion: One
... 2015 and 2016 has the maximum earning. one the other hand, textiles with presented...
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Suggestion: Gems
...in the minimum value of the chart. gems and jewellery show an average value of ...
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...ge value of earning around 40 billions. this product presents a falling trend of 5.1...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, second, so, third, well, except for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1113.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03619909502 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44230743033 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8944734345 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.181818182 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.54545454545 5.23603664747 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214163123366 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937146497146 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114137544786 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143271191086 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103048911117 0.0819641961636 126% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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