Tourist accommodation

Essay topics:

Tourist accommodation

The two illustrated geographical maps give some information before and after the preparation of facilities for the visitors.

There are obvious differences between these maps, which mostly are about the construction of accommodations and preparing residential areas on this island.

Before construction, it can just be seen a number of trees on the island's map. The eastern area of the island has remained without any change, while central and western areas have respectively equipped by nine and six tents for tourists' settlement. Moreover, there are two larger tents in the empty area between the accommodations where have been allocated to the restaurant and reception.

In front of the reception, a pier can be seen to make access to two boats placed in the southern beach. The western area of the island has also dedicated for swimming in a safe specified beach. It can be seen circular and line roads which connect the whole mentioned facilities together throughout the island.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30817610063 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94863265864 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610062893082 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7066385678 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10658477941 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0386859457072 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503308865893 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0609913642078 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617538151599 0.0819641961636 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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