Different choices
I strongly believe in this idea that people in the contemporary era have more choices than people living in the past.
There are different aspects and facilities nowadays, which have made the possibility of various options in our recent life. one of these options is the existence of discrepant topis and academic fields in schools and universities. Thanks to the scientific improvements and innovative methods in academic environments, students can find their talents to continue their interests in specified subjects and fields. Moreover, through using internet and searching techniques, they will obtain a mountain of data which people did not easily accessible to them, previously.
The other brilliant improvement can be observed in the car producing industry. Due to significant developments in designing and manufacturing cars, people have so many choices and prices in transportation's market compared to the past decades. this world's trade has rapidly thrived because of changing our lifestyle and people's preference to have convenient, fast, and advanced vehicles.
The other items which I believe that they have more variety nowadays, are types of foods. Recipes and cooking methods have completely revolutionized the dishes all over the world. nowadays, people have lots of options in restaurants from traditional foods to international ones and from fast foods to healthy and homemade foods. these varieties can be perceived not only in different nations but also in different domestic restaurants of a country.
In short, I believe that changing lifestyle, scientific improvements, and insatiable appetite of people for change have all made a condition to have different options in our recent life in comparison with the past.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60299625468 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03706754365 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580524344569 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8369282064 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.076923077 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149423756064 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484736769066 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694915930956 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788851846783 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209837038443 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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