Animals
Some people admit that animals are the correct choice for drug testing before human's usage. The other people think that it is not fair to use animals for these medical purposes.
In spite of astonishing improvements in biomedical sciences, experimental animals still play an important role in medicine making laboratories. The medical experts can detect the influence of a drug on the body of a candidate animal and then decide to do the necessary modifications or produce it for humans.
There are some special animals in experimental environments which are used for medical tests. One of the examples of these animals is the mouse. These animals spend breeding steps in s special condition and are born through a precise supervisory by experts. I think that testing the drugs on these type of animals has no problem and can inhibit the probable mistakes of making the medicines. The other significant and reasonable cause for the existence of these animals is because of diagnosing the common diseases between the human and animals. As an instance, there are some illnesses in mammals which are the same in humans, so trying to find a suitable treatment may be beneficial for both people and animals.
On the other hand, all the creatures in the world have the right of being alive. In some cases, doctors have to do their tests on special species which do not have a growing condition in experiments. So, they may use animals from the natural environment. Horses maybe some of these examples. I think that this activity is in contrast living right of animals and is not a proper way for this medical intention. The other fact is that these results from the animals maybe are not completely credible, because of the complex anatomy of humans and their differences with the animals. I believe that using advanced simulators of the human body can be a more appropriate method to check the medicine effects and use a fewer number of animals in this regard.
Although the medicine producing sciences have experienced brilliant improvements during these decades, the harmful effects of some drugs do not remain any solution for makers, except testing on animals. Totally, I agree with these methods in an experimental environment and for the purpose of curing and surviving the humankind.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, still, then, i think, in contrast, in some cases, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1916.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01570680628 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72363045939 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489528795812 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 630.9 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9864245451 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.842105263 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1052631579 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346995916104 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143875702115 0.084324248473 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104639826287 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224122511265 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116656101154 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.