Immigration advantages and disadvantages
One of the greatest events in a person's life might be immigration. It's an important decision which its merits or demerits will be resulted in a significant progress or worse happening for immigrants.
One of the remarkable advantages of immigration is finding and reaching to new opportunities on occupation and education. There are productive workers or industrious engineers who can achieve to a better position with more salary and benefits in destination country. On the hand, students may find this chance to continue academic education in some more advanced and state of the art universities. There are grants and financial scholarships for someone who can prove themselves. Admin departments help students to manage their life and just focus on the their courses and projects as well.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages for immigration which can not be ignored. Two of them are culture shock and being far from family and relations. People of a society often laugh to a same things and resent similar behaviours. They exactly know the same meaning of such words same as respect, worth, and custom. In brief, they live in a place where used to its culture. Therefore, living in another country for immigrants and dealing with a different culture can be a challenging matter for them. Another sensible disadvantage belongs to some type of people who lives in close-knit families. They have so many nostalgic memories in their mind and usually spend more times with their immediate families, relatives, or friends. They are so close mentally and have lots of things in common. For the persons with this personality trait, being far from family may be annoying or even impossible.
In summary, immigration as an important decision in each person's life can be led to positive or negative effects. However, it is reasonable to consider both parts and find out which of them outweighs the other. By this way and getting the other experienced persons' advises, we are likely about to make a more successful decision with fewer mistakes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...mic education in some more advanced and state of the art universities. There are grants and fina...
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'their'?
Suggestion: the; their
... to manage their life and just focus on the their courses and projects as well. On the...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ration as an important decision in each persons life can be led to positive or negative...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in brief, in summary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 10.4138276553 211% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09467455621 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8446157071 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568047337278 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8385916173 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123900090084 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366595200425 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073641362613 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571029242568 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380345064229 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.