Fast food Yes or no

Essay topics:

Fast food. Yes or no ?!

You may just close your eyes and enjoy eating a desired fast food or make your healthy food.
In fact, fast foods are favorite diets, specially among the youths, and these are one of the challenging subjects for nutritionists who are researching about relation between the food and healthy. Certainly, majority of people prefer to eat a kind of food which know about its ingredients than to eat out. But, it is not possible for all the times. For example, you have gone to a shopping centre, and you feel so hungry after some hours windows shopping. Then you see colourful and fascinating stations of fast foods. It smells good and seems really delicious. But are you sure about it or not. fast food; yes or no ?

One of the main reasons of being enthusiastic to the fast foods are changing the human's lifestyle. For example, consider a couple in a big industrial city who both work out of the home. They may hardly find a free time to cook for dinner or prepare their lunch diet. These people usually eat fast foods at nights.

Another reason is bad habits for eating. Some people used to eat salty and oily foods.  Fast foods satisfy this kind of appetite for them as well. They do not care to harmful effects of  fast foods, and they just enjoy eating whatever like.

I believe that it's better we make our food using healthy items and have more fruits and vegetables in our meals. But, If we had to eat fast foods it should be limited to ones or twice a month. We can also eat out in some better restaurants instead of wherever find at street. In short, changing lifestyle, making own food, leaving bad habits for eating in the first step, and limiting the fast foods or at least choosing the best ones of them in the second step can help us to have healthier body and less problems with our daily meals.

Votes
Average: 8.7 (2 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 596, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Fast
...ious. But are you sure about it or not. fast food; yes or no ? One of the main re...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...stic to the fast foods are changing the humans lifestyle. For example, consider a coup...
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Line 8, column 502, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun problems is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... can help us to have healthier body and less problems with our daily meals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, really, second, so, then, thus, well, at least, for example, in fact, in short, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1496.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51963746224 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28441963911 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.6498856357 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351507652254 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129291095736 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215775114555 0.0667982634062 323% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197232030851 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615932663175 0.056905535591 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.0946893788 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 50.2224549098 161% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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