he table below shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the results of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table displays how many people visited Ashdown Museum and the pie charts illustrate how satisfied they felt before and after it was renovated.
It can be clearly seen that the number of people visiting the museum and their satisfaction considerably increased after it was reconstructed.
After the refurbishment, the museum received many more visitors, from 74,000 to 92,000, a remarkable increase of 18,000. Noticeably, it also gained much more positive feedback from them. While before the renovation, just 15% of visitors felt very satisfied with the museum, the rating figure doubled to 35% after the work done. The number of those who found it satisfying also rose considerably from 30% to 40%.
While the museum enjoyed the much higher level of visitor satisfaction, the proportion of negative feedback decreased significantly from 40% for dissatisfaction to 15%, a drop of well over half. The figure for the people who rated the museum as very dissatisfying also fell half, from 10% to 5%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...ny people visited Ashdown Museum and the pie charts illustrate how satisfied they...
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Suggestion:
... gained much more positive feedback from them. While before the renovation, just ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25925925926 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92691549657 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604938271605 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1542920259 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204378224572 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907316846714 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850890679869 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144237710818 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803686261634 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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