Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that people today have been more and more dependent on computers in their work and daily life. While I agree that the computer plays an irreplaceable role in our modern life, I believe that it is not the most important machine which has ever been invented.
On the one hand, we can see the powerful influence of this tool in every aspect of our life. When we go to work, the first thing we might have to do is to open our computer, checking and typing e-mails. Whenever we want to save any long information, all that we have to do is doing some clicks and typing some words, which took a tremendous amount of time and space if done traditionally. In what way has the computer changed our entertainment world? Before the invention of computers, we needed a lot of CDs, heavy and space-consuming players to play music or watch our favorite movies and of course, just at home. Nowadays, we can enjoy all that we like whenever and wherever we want. Thousands of songs and moives are stored in just one computer. Computers also revolutionalise teaching and learning activities. For example, teachers nowadays can make their lessons much more vivid and interesting without much time consumed by using visual aids and software available in their computer.
Although computers are extremely necessary in our life, other inventions are just equally important because they are the foundations for all other inventions. For example, without the birth of electricity, no modern machines, including computers can run. Another example is printers which rocketed the spread of knowledge. This enables people of all classes in the society to access and share scientific information, which is one of prerequisite conditions for many important inventions later.
In conclusion, while the invention of computers can be seen as a revolution in the techological age, the computer itself cannot be replaced above many other inventions in recent centuries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02469135802 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86096960509 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6353335246 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.75 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8125 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151473180155 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497371508527 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458836050049 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107077486945 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338404202608 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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