Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is noticeable that computing technologies may be one of the most crucial innovations in the last ten decades. While there are various beneficial inventions, I agree with those who believe this argument due to several reasons.
On the one hand, computing industrial has become indispensable in people living, especially those who live and work in the metropolis cities all over the world in the latest ten-decade due to the fact that it is extreme popular for using in citizens. Moreover, it has been invented in order to apply in a range of countries, which was retricted by boundaries. Therefore, it has enabled not only all nations worldwide to research, but also all peoples over the world to develop and update. Wherever modern people on earth living, for instance, there are the apparences of applications which the computing advantageous technology brings about.
On the other hand, the development of computer technology is one of the most solid foundations which support to the advancing of diverts different other technologies such as biology, agriculture, medical technologies, and so on. However, the other industrial has adapted further the latest computing science into calculating and estimating the future consquences as the result in their improvement. In surgeology, for example, the doctors can simulate the virtual surgeral shift before practical implement in order to alliviate vast majority of ricks of unwanted situations.
In conclusion, computer era plays the most vital role in the progress of historical human revolution. As result their popular and solid foundating for the other science are defined their importance for hundreds years.

Votes
Average: 5.9 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: enabled
...tricted by boundaries. Therefore, it is enable not only all nations worldwide to resea...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...edical technologies, and so on. However, the other industrial has adapted further...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39846743295 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00618115149 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3807215208 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.090909091 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144191928828 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535023482473 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452938015754 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980489162436 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619990806567 0.056905535591 109% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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