This graph presents the amount of average carbon dioxide per person in 4 different countries between 1967 to 2007.Overall,in 40 years,some countries have reduced the average of it while others are steady growing up.The United Kingdom people in 1967 used between 10% to 12%,but that number is increasingly going down to 8% to 10% in 2007. Other example is Sweden,despite increasing up to more than 10%,it had been down just less than 6%. However, both Italy and Portugal share a trend of growing up and there is no sign of going down.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Overall
...ifferent countries between 1967 to 2007.Overall,in 40 years,some countries have reduced...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...t countries between 1967 to 2007.Overall,in 40 years,some countries have reduced th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...between 1967 to 2007.Overall,in 40 years,some countries have reduced the average of i...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...f it while others are steady growing up.The United Kingdom people in 1967 used betw...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , despite
... to 10% in 2007. Other example is Sweden,despite increasing up to more than 10%,it had b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 442.0 965.302439024 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 92.0 196.424390244 47% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80434782609 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.09704101468 3.73543355544 83% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72364497796 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.547539520022 137% => OK
syllable_count: 128.7 283.868780488 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.14003123 43.030603864 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 147.333333333 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.6666666667 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.215688989381 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.103423049105 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 11.4329268293 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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