IT IS BETTER FOR COLLEGE STUDENTS TO LIVE FAR AWAY FROM HOME THAN LIVE AT HOME WITH THEIR PARENTS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
It is argued that independent student accommodation is one of the aspects that often pay attention to university students while many people think that residing in the academy is better to living home with their parents. I totally agree with this view for a number of reasons.
First off, it can be seen from staying in a dorm is quite useful for the number of youth who prepare to study the university education programs. It is no doubt that the room of student is located nearly the classroom which will make individuals lost fewer times to commute daily. By contrast, these students accommodation far away from school can dedicate more time to move, not to mention frequent traffic jams that could prevent them from going to school punctually.
In addition, students need to go outside and get their own experience. This first experience will teach them about solve the various cases and wrestling with lots of challenges. This falsifies the apprehensions and hypothetical worries of their parents about them. As a matter of fact, this is possible only if they have survival opportunity alone from the support of family. Finally, the number of schoolchildren live with their family due to lack of finance. However, in these cases, they usually have other ways to obtain the development of a healthy personality.
In conclusion, it seems to me that living in college is the better option for students for the above-mentioned reasons during higher education, as of course, it is the base to their future, especially, professional life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...es to commute daily. By contrast, these students accommodation far away from school can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, of course, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 256.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01953125 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81802571331 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6171875 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 1.53170731707 718% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5009735114 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311556553747 0.215688989381 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917982147571 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0787822265239 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182678689214 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812026727897 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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