A large number of young people cannot find a job when they leave university. What problems will youth unemployment cause for individuals and for society? Give some measures to help reduce unemployment.
It is become a common phenomenon that many youths cannot find job in an increasingly competitive society. This issue will cause negative effect to both individuals and society. And the essay will discuss the influence of this unemployment and give some measure to solve it.
First and foremost, for society, the unemployment of these graduates is the waste of social resources. The graduates have no opportunity to transfer their academic knowledge and skill into productivity, so paying money in higher education are invested in vain. Moreover, many youngsters will hesitate to continuous their further study because they think higher certification cannot help them when applying for job. For people himself, a negative effect is that young people have to deal with some psychological problems during long time being jobless. They may feel anxious and always lack a sense of achievement. In a long term, these emotion will become potential barriers for their future success at workplace and in personal life.
Some short time employment can help these youths largely. Although they cannot find a decent job immediately, they can still get part-time job not only to be able to feed themselves, but also collect job experience to prepare for future career. Also, the government can motivate graduates to start their own business. Small businesses require lower start-up cost, thereby it can allow these young people to use what they have learned in university more effectively.
Overall, the youngsters should be more confident toward themselves, and never give up to find their dream job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 631, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this emotion' or 'these emotions'?
Suggestion: this emotion; these emotions
...a sense of achievement. In a long term, these emotion will become potential barriers for thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33992094862 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76319924004 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 106.607317073 148% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624505928854 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.2144859808 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341158447427 0.215688989381 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102008835785 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060671975393 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180483052518 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610897072056 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 40.7170731707 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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