Life cycle and anatomy of a lady bird

Essay topics:

Life cycle and anatomy of a lady bird

The given diagrams illustrate the life cycle of a female bird and the inner structure of its body. Overall, the life cycle of a lady bird should pass 3 different stages before it reached its maturity. The anatomy of this bird is not so complicated and it is showed by 8 various components.
Firstly, the life cycle of a lady bird begins with egg stage which can continue 2 or 5 days with forming a leaf which allow the eggs to be hanged. Before the pupa stage is reached, it should pass larval stage in 21 days. After completing 7 days pupa stage, the mature ladybug is formed.
Regarding to second diagram, the upper part of ladybug is called head and it contains 2 antennas as well as eyes on it. There is a pronotum part for protecting the head part of mature bird. The wings of ladybug composite of red elytra with black dots on them, which covers the body part of it. In addition, 4 legs of insect make the movement possible and one part of digestion system illustrated as abdomen in the second diagram.

Votes
Average: 7.2 (45 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, so, well, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41711229947 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3878906572 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.02710126 43.030603864 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296129017637 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111403032379 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128177781787 0.0843802449381 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22172794162 0.15604864568 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.194165177237 0.0819641961636 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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