Life cycle of a frog

Essay topics:

Life cycle of a frog

The diagram illustrates the life cycle of a frog, in general, frog eggs are passed through six key stages before growing up to an adult frog.

In the first stage of life cycle, eggs are laid in the water plants, each having an embryo inside. After a few weeks, tadpole then hatches and increases its size with a long tail. In the next step, head of tadpole grows bigger and front legs gradually appear to prepare for future life on the land.

At the fourth stage of the cycle, tadpole starts of pulmonary breathing, it is marked that they can live two different habitats before the emergence of a tadpole frog which has a bigger mouth and a short tail. A young frog still lives near the pond where it was born until the mature of an adult frog. At this final stage, it moves onto the land and its tail also disappears.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, still, then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 673.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39869281046 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.07431664058 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660130718954 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7058815451 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1428571429 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308518055942 0.215688989381 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124684023114 0.103423049105 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.148881962189 0.0843802449381 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228748670118 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16687041833 0.0819641961636 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.24 11.4140731707 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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