Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets, many small local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree and disagree?
It is supposed that medium and small local businesses have died out as they have an underwhelming probability of competing with supermarket chains that are booming robustly over the world. Someone has an opinion that the closure of local business may cause the disappearance of local residents. From my perspective, however, a sharp disagreement is my point of views.
The lack of local business can cause several inconvenient problems to the local population. Residents, living in a specific area, usually go to shops near their home like a daily routine instead of going to the supermarkets in the town center. Basically, it is pretty time-consuming and may be more expensive compared to getting goods from nearby stores. An actual example is set out as follows, in case you and your girlfriend suddenly have an interest in sex, and there aren’t any condoms shops around there, except a unique supermarket where is away from approximately 5 kilometers. Consequently, that problem may cause a bit nervous generally in case of the lack of internal business.
Even if local business shut down or bankrupt, it also does not threaten the existence of the local inhabitant. As a matter of fact, a number of supermarkets and commercial centers have been springing up like mushrooms after rain, which supply almost necessary things from daily items to luxurious products like mobile phone, laptop or diamond ring, etc. Some supermarket chains built according to the style of modern architecture with open-space and other services attached which results in attracting more people. Indeed, owners always expect those of them is no longer to buy items, but those also are deemed to be the kind of entertainment for people to enjoy. Therefore, the closure of local business is much more difficult to have an effect on the disappearance of the local population.
In conclusion, I completely disagree that local stores’ failure of competing can cause to the lack of a part of local people.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13230769231 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97643605637 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593846153846 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3329483806 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230279726672 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092635005985 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104486182654 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156053866232 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446418940219 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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