Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the appearance and rapid development of supermarkets cause local communities to disappear in the future. There are strong arguments both for and against this view but I believe it depends on different reasons.
I totally concur with the idea that supermarkets gain popularity in the purchasing behavior of local consumers. Firstly, supermarkets have a huge amount of commodities for local consumers to choose from. This could be an advantage for them to save their time for shopping. Secondly, this kind of distribution channel helps the local be more likely to approach the high-quality products as supermarkets have more resources to purchase the goods with quality certificates. The Organic label, for example, is more likely to be found in supermarkets rather than wet markets which are frequently located in local areas.
However, I believe that the disappearance of regional communities is not originated from supermarkets. The first prominent justification is that consumers do not have to move to other places due to purchasing behavior. As a matter of fact, supermarkets now appear not only in large cities but also in small provinces. This means that rural residents might access any supermarkets near their place without commuting too far. Moreover, in many cases, there are regional products that have special taste and aroma, and this only occurs in certain territories. As a result, the chances are that the local people will remain to stay there to keep their own secrets no matter where supermarkets are. For instance, Phu Quoc fish sauce, which has a special taste with an authentic flavor extracted from fresh anchovies, creates a traditional handicraft even when Phu Quoc island does not have a lot of modern distributors.
In conclusion, while there are reasons given to justify that supermarkets might not take a toll on the appearance of local communities, I believe this is not an accurate statement under any circumstances.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a matter of fact, as a result, in many cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26265822785 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02187685142 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7651987277 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.866666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173467647453 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630296062132 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561007572516 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111126159259 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133644882653 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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