Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The expansion of technology in past few decades has risen concerns about the local product in the market. As we know that there are the variety of items have patented in this century which has changed human lifestyle dramatically. Because of that people are mostly relying on new products and prefer an easy access to these products. In this regards, supermarkets have played a major role to fulfil the human demand easily and accessible, thereby it has severely impaired the local markets in some countries. I do agree with the damaging impacts of the supermarket on local businesses. In this study, I will highlight the pros and cons of supermarket along with the local way of selling products.
Considering the advantages of the supermarket, firstly, it saves time by providing the plethora of items without searching them in different places. Secondly, it posses an easily approachable infrastructure along with an updated security system, thereby having a car park for automobiles and care for purchase items. Additionally, shopping at the supermarket is cheaper than buying things from the different public stores. As public transport is usually linked to the supermarkets in the city, so, one can easily approach them. This has two indirect advantageous; one it saves fuel price and second, it dwindles traffic congestion in the city.
On the other hand, the supermarket has almost vanished the local businesses in many developing countries. In these countries, the local businessmen are facing the severe economic crisis as their artefacts are unable to compete with international brands sold at the supermarket. Because of that many developing countries are confronted with plenty of socio-economic issues such as poverty, unemployment, and unrest in the country. Even many people are employed due to the expansion of supermarkets but this figure is below then the number of unemployed people.
To sum up, in my opinion, the proliferation of supermarket is undeniably good for a society unless it doesn't create any social unrest in the community. Finally, I will suggest that supermarket's branches should be open in rural areas, so that, they can be benefited too.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: easy access
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Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, such as, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1836.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26074498567 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98612429155 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593123209169 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7483750576 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5294117647 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243788693975 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775325006648 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800786169471 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133439041587 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102337484847 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.