The life cycle of the salmon.
This diagram depicts the different stages in the life cycle of salmon. It is apparent that salmon's life cycle is an ongoing process, and there are four remarkable changes throughout the periods.
Overall, salmon's life cycle involves four significant stages(egg stage, fry stage, smolt stage, and adult stage) where egg stage and adult salmon are the beginning and end of the life cycle, respectively.
Life begins as a small egg, and it laid's beneath of upper river on stones. And then, eggs fertilized to fish after staying in it for 5 to 6 months. Once, the fish's size reached 3 to 8cm, and this phase is also known as fry. Then, they moved to the lower river, which is faster than the upper river, and stayed in it for four years approximately. Until they transform to smolt, and their length grew up to 12 to 15cm.
Finally, they moved to the open sea and spent another five years in the ocean. While in this period of transformation, their body has grown up to a large extent. And in terms of length, it can be up to 70 to 76cm.
Interestingly, it is apparent that it would take approx 9 to 10 years to become adult salmon.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: salmons'; salmon's
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53883495146 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46825924578 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592233009709 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.482926829268 1657% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5755931761 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9166666667 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 5.23603664747 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337162823135 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114753311229 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166517506927 0.0843802449381 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198531521148 0.15604864568 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204127917003 0.0819641961636 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.2329268293 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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