Life cycle of the silkworm and silk cloth production.
The pictures depict the life cycle of the silkworm and how silk cloth is produced. There are 9 stages in the diagrams from lays up to woven fabric.
In the beginning is that a moth lays up eggs on a leaf, after which silkworm larva hatch 10 day later. They use their own mulberry leaf as a food, During the 4 - 6 weeks larva produces a lot of silk. After 3 - 8 days the larva is located on cocoons, so that helps its to become a moth 16 days later.
In order to make a silk weave, first of all you have to select silkworm's cocoons. The cocoons are put in the pan with hot water, which make them boiled. The following step is that thread, which size is from 300 to 900 meters, need to be unwinded and twisted then. The next step is that the thread is moved to another pan, in order to bee dyed. Final complete woven fabric is moved to the pan again, which makes its redyed.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 264, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 701.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.07558139535 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01288129518 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 207.0 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 14.1240928912 43.030603864 33% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.1 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181410086109 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789701277654 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.155896251817 0.0843802449381 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158536891188 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146867679135 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.09 11.4140731707 53% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 11.0658536585 54% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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