The line graph depicts information about percentage of unemployed rates in Spain , Germany and Italy in between 1991 and 2005 , while the table shows data about employment Rates of men and women in Europe in 1991 as percentage of total population.
In an overview , unemployment rate is maximum in Italy, whereas minimum in Spain, while Germany remains stabilized but employment rate is highest in Germany.
As,it is apparent from the graph that speed of unemployment in Spain was around 19% decreased to 8% in 2005, while in Germany rate of jobless people remains leveled off at the end around 8% , where as in Italy experienced lowest liberty rate in 1991 , which rose to highest at around 12% at the end of 2005.
In 1991, Europe employment rate was high at Germany , 70.5% men and 54.4% female but in Spain was Lowest , 66.2% men and 32.3% women , while 77.1 % men and 37.8% women , which was second highest country among three European countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91925465839 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53896820847 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8951528433 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 198.0 112.824112599 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.25 22.9334400587 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320869103044 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.201342319889 0.103423049105 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141441484798 0.0843802449381 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201342319889 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141441484798 0.0819641961636 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.9 13.2329268293 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 61.2550243902 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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