The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
The line graph indicates how many times a year were some junk foods (namely pizza, hamburger, fish and chip) consumed by young adults in Australia from 1975 to 2000.
Overall, the times that teenager ate pizza and hamburgers increased dramatically and, to be particular, hamburgers underwent the fastest growth in numbers. Following the reverse pattern, there’s a drastic fall in the statistics of fish and chips.
In 1975, young teenagers just consumed pizza and hamburgers about 7 times a year. That figure was far lower than fish and chip, which were eaten 100 times. However, since then, the numbers of fish and chips plunged to less than 40 times, apart from a marginal rise again in 1985.
In sharp contrast to this, the eating times of pizza and hamburger rocketed to over 80 and 100 times respectively in the final year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 141.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97872340426 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52778931619 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659574468085 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 202.5 283.868780488 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8105259367 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.285714286 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136930005838 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631336218605 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844052918294 0.0843802449381 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863413305668 0.15604864568 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091517695954 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.