The line graph demonstrates the volume of travelers at the underground station in London.
The line graph demonstrates the volume of travelers at the underground station in London.
Overall, it is crystal clear that the number of commuters reached its peak two times per day; despite experiencing some fluctuations.
Looking at the graph, the subway starts at 6.00 A.M with 100 passengers. This number increased twofold after one hour with 200, before reaching to the highest amount at 8.00 A.M, accounting for 400 people. By 10.00 A.M, the figure for metro travelers had seen a sharp decrease and constituted slightly below 200, which is half of the number at 8.00 A.M. Since then, it has increased moderately to 300 at 14.30 P.M.
In the afternoon, and from 14.30 onwards, the number of subway commuters has plunged and accounted for the lowest number ar 16.00 P.M with 100. Approximately 400 people have selected underground station at 18.00 P.M for their commute, which is four times higher than 16.00 P.M. This volume, however, had gone down consistently until 20.00 P.M to nearly 110 people, before going up at 21.00 P.M and falling at 22.00 P.M.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... the graph, the subway starts at 6.00 A.M with 100 passengers. This number increa...
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...eaching to the highest amount at 8.00 A.M, accounting for 400 people. By 10.00 A....
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..., accounting for 400 people. By 10.00 A.M, the figure for metro travelers had see...
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...ounted for the lowest number ar 16.00 P.M with 100. Approximately 400 people have...
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...selected underground station at 18.00 P.M for their commute, which is four times ...
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...commute, which is four times higher than 16.00 P.M. This volume, however, had gon...
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...ad gone down consistently until 20.00 P.M to nearly 110 people, before going up a...
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... 110 people, before going up at 21.00 P.M and falling at 22.00 P.M.
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... 110 people, before going up at 21.00 P.M and falling at 22.00 P.M.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96089385475 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5715927903 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.874384027 43.030603864 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.0 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272470707703 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232961462377 0.103423049105 225% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.347422240498 0.0843802449381 412% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308476457971 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.402439242836 0.0819641961636 491% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.2329268293 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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