The line graph shows the channel one news viewing figures per day on one year

Essay topics:

The line graph shows the channel one news viewing figures per day on one year

The line graph compares the number of viewers per day of the channel one news from January to December on one year. From a general perspective, different trends in the number of viewers could be observed, including a growth of 11pm news, a stability of 1pm news and a reduction of 6pm, and 9:30pm news.

In January, the 6pm news had the highest quantity of viewers per day at nearly 5 million viewers, followed by the 9:30pm and 1pm news. From January to August, there was a 11pm news that was introduced on 1st May then reached a peak of 4 million viewers in August, significantly surpassing the other news in the number of viewers, while the 6pm news and 9:30pm news suffered a huge decline, in which not many people chose to watch 9:30pm news.

During the next four months, the 11pm news plummeted by 3 million viewers and were less than others. Similarly, there was a slight increase in the number of viewers on 6pm news but after that this figure diminished gradually to over 3 million viewers. On the other hand, people watched 9:30pm news, which witnessed a considerable rise to 3 million viewers. Meanwhile, The 1pm news remained stable at 1.3 million viewers over twelve months.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, similarly, then, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68571428571 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50325864722 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504761904762 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.6438282477 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24680086397 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135063504689 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163734511756 0.0843802449381 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194606113491 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125244069545 0.0819641961636 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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