The line graph shows estimated sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams.
The provided graph illustrates information about how much Dubai gold sales in one year in 2002.Units are measured in millions dirhams.
Overall, as is observed from the chart, the amount of gold sales in March was by far the highest, while in January and December were the lowest.
Looking at the data in more detail, it can be seen that, the amount of gold which was sold surged dramatically, started from 200 millions of dirhams in January. It then peaked at 350 millions of dirhams in March before plummeting sharply to approximately 110 million of dirhams in July.
Turning to the remaining data, it is evident that the amount of Dubai gold sales was fluctuating in the next 4 months started from roughly 110 millions dirhams in June and nearly 190 millions dirhams in October. Finally, it levelled out at approximatelly 195 millions of dirhams in the last 3 months.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Units
...ch Dubai gold sales in one year in 2002.Units are measured in millions dirhams. ...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '200 million'.
Suggestion: 200 million
... sold surged dramatically, started from 200 millions of dirhams in January. It then peaked at 3...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '350 million'.
Suggestion: 350 million
...f dirhams in January. It then peaked at 350 millions of dirhams in March before plummeting shar...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ount of Dubai gold sales was fluctuating in the next 4 months started from roughl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...months started from roughly 110 millions dirhams in June and nearly 190 millions ...
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Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '195 million'.
Suggestion: 195 million
...ally, it levelled out at approximatelly 195 millions of dirhams in the last 3 months.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 736.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90666666667 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68225444149 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593333333333 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 213.3 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8901922226 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.666666667 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245783196124 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126249484277 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0954499910241 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16168665081 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0946117325829 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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