The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005.

Essay topics:

The line graph shows three different crimes in England and Wales in 1970-2005.

The given line graph illustrates the number of three different types of crimes happened in England and Wales over the course of 35 years starting in 1970.
Looking at the graph, it’s immediately obvious that the quantity of street robberies was by far lowest over the time frame. Additionally, the figure for car theft experienced the most noticeable change.
In 1970, the crime rate of car theft stood at approximately 0.4 million while the figures for house burgling and street robbery were much lower, with roughly 0.2 and 0.1 million respectively. From 1970 to 1995, gradual increases were witnessed in the quantity of car theft and house burgling but this number for car theft was significantly higher, considerably a peak of 1.6 million crimes in 1995. At the same time, there was little change in the figure for street robbery.
The number of crimes fell dramatically over the next 10 years, by around 0.6 million in car theft and nearly 0.2 million in house burgling. By contrast, the quantity of street robbery registered a slight rise, reaching 0.2 million in 2005.

Votes
Average: 6.6 (3 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63177188473 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574585635359 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7377032655 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.625 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192965391884 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881586854496 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134883377476 0.0843802449381 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150455677582 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.167234740976 0.0819641961636 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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