The line graph shows total bonus payments from April to March by a private sector, financial year ending 2001 to financial year ending 2016 in the UK.

Essay topics:

The line graph shows total bonus payments from April to March by a private sector, financial year ending 2001 to financial year ending 2016 in the UK.

The line graph represents the trend of the bonus payments made by three different sectors, namely; finance and insurance, rest of economy and whole economy from 2001 to 2016 in the UK. The units are measured in billions of pound sterling.
Overall, the total bonus payments have increased for all sectors. Whole economy was paid the highest bonus payments in overall and this remained at its dominance for more than 15 years of periods.
Whole economy paid the highest total bonus payments to its employees. In 2001, it was about 22 billion pounds before it drastically rose to its peak of 40 billion pounds in 2007 and then the amount dropped to around 30 billion pounds by 2008. From 2008 to 2016, the total amount of bonus paid by whole economy steadily increased back to over 40 billion pounds.
Meanwhile, finance and insurance, and rest of economy were the second and the third highest bonus payments, which had the similar trend with the whole economy. The bonus payments recorded for the rest of economy was about 15 billion pounds and 10 billion pounds for finance and insurance in the beginning of the financial year, by 2008 it had the peak to reach at about 22 billion and close to 20 billion pound sterling respectively. While the rest of economy had shown the constant incremental trend after 2008 to end at over 30 billion pound, the finance and insurance sector had declined to around 12 billion pound and remained at the similar figure until 2016.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'second', 'then', 'third', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.243636363636 0.268076937826 91% => OK
Verbs: 0.0981818181818 0.116061578633 85% => OK
Adjectives: 0.08 0.0759168565197 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.04 0.0366838410393 109% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0218181818182 0.0131127313244 166% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145454545455 0.155750635184 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0254545454545 0.0379272487307 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.33837057285 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0363636363636 0.0210936926555 172% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0909090909091 0.0948980150116 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00363636363636 0.00967000014798 38% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1466.0 1161.00487805 126% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.9 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77165354331 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73763899035 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.322834645669 0.337110787985 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.267716535433 0.247514529752 108% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.145669291339 0.171178102325 85% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0708661417323 0.112407865282 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33837057285 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44094488189 0.546246751206 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 40.151000051 49.3433353143 81% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 8.93414634146 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.4 23.0094962315 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.191112146 42.9750493124 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.6 135.714022679 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 23.0094962315 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.689975730869 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 52.1716535433 47.7609492067 109% => OK
Elegance: 2.59090909091 2.94281807926 88% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33402141023 0.418131533498 80% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.231902676853 0.181151798455 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.135203689331 0.0850326197045 159% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.729204826642 0.706616315825 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140177755461 0.157042692854 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18262311095 0.228904883108 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689698066762 0.108899403657 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.341479786387 0.367819155151 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0907335207771 0.0812612215331 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237815989391 0.316326947829 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562841377875 0.0921553760075 61% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70731707317 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 3.16585365854 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 7.1512195122 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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