The line graphs show the percentage of people living below poverty line in developing countries for the year 1900 to 2050

Essay topics:

The line graphs show the percentage of people living below poverty line in developing countries for the year 1900 to 2050

The linear representation reveals the information about In develop countries of percentage people by below poverty line during the period 1900 to 2050 It is clear ,and coherent representation.

Overall,it is evident that maximum amount of data to Brazil,and minimum ratio in China.

Adding from details, that four In these process four countury,and four century was available.As well as, In first two countury of data ratio to all century had 7,8,25,80,85 Respectively.

On other hand, that In another two century 2000,2050 of data ratio were differ from first ones. Nextly In 2000 of data amount of four country 59,65,85,87 . subsequently, In 2050 century of data ratio 15,32,65,98, Respectively.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 598.0 965.302439024 62% => OK
No of words: 108.0 196.424390244 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53703703704 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.22370979547 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16746357828 2.65546596893 119% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657407407407 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 171.0 283.868780488 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.8745971885 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152516480207 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834037780803 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136281160463 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110185008153 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160642419968 0.0819641961636 196% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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