The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and present
The two maps describe an evolution of seaside village in 1995 and at present. Overall,it is readily apparent that,land for housing has been extended,whereas, fish market has been demolished to erect apartments.
To begin with,it can be seen that, there was the forest park in 1995,but at present it has been replaced with tennis court.Similarly, golf court has been constructed on the place of farmland in the north-east side of seaside village.Moreover, in 1995,limited portion of land was accounted for housing,whilst at present count of houses either sides of the road,has been increased.
In addition, there were shops situated at the west-east corner of the village,has been demolished to construct series of restaurants. Furthermore,the fish market has removed for making the apartments and fishing port is missing at present, that was constructed in 1995.Finally,new car park area has been added near to the hotel.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... village in 1995 and at present. Overall,it is readily apparent that,land for housi...
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...ent. Overall,it is readily apparent that,land for housing has been extended,whereas, ...
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... that,land for housing has been extended,whereas, fish market has been demolished to ere...
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... to erect apartments. To begin with,it can be seen that, there was the forest ...
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Suggestion: Similarly
... it has been replaced with tennis court.Similarly, golf court has been constructed on the...
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Suggestion: Moreover
... the north-east side of seaside village.Moreover, in 1995,limited portion of land was ac...
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...ortion of land was accounted for housing,whilst at present count of houses either sides...
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...sent count of houses either sides of the road,has been increased. In additio...
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...ount of houses either sides of the road,has been increased. In addition, there...
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...d at the west-east corner of the village,has been demolished to construct series of ...
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...truct series of restaurants. Furthermore,the fish market has removed for making the ...
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... and fishing port is missing at present, that was constructed in 1995.Finally,new...
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Suggestion: Finally
... present, that was constructed in 1995.Finally,new car park area has been added near t...
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...t, that was constructed in 1995.Finally,new car park area has been added near to th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, furthermore, moreover, similarly, whereas, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47222222222 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.44018553907 2.65546596893 130% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638888888889 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 105.156264673 43.030603864 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.6 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6 5.23603664747 317% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154330761185 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108839013325 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13322835314 0.0843802449381 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119202859411 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573640970992 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.04 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.