The map shows 2 possible sites for the supermarket
The map describes two projected locations for the new supermarket in Garlson.
Overall, it is clear that both sites are adjacent to the railway and main roads.
It can be seen from the map that S1 is in the countryside to the north west os Garlson and it is only 12 km away from Hindon. Moreover, it is located next to residential area and people can go to the supermarket by both railway and main road.
S2 is in the town centre and it is covered by industrial zone. It is aslo close to the housing area and populated region. In terms of access by road or railway, the town centre is a no traffic zone, so people do not access to S2 by main road. But they who live in Hindon and Cransdon can go to supermarket by railway.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 586.0 965.302439024 61% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.18571428571 4.92477711251 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44823968414 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 180.0 283.868780488 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3130401177 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 73.25 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148968139748 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655534081076 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080172034135 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112091566633 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879609868722 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.73 11.4140731707 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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