The maps below changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparations where relevant
The diagrams illustrate the infrastructure development of Castellon – a Spanish city, from 2000 to today. Overall, only the university buildings remain the same from the year 2000 to till today. The interesting point from the map is that the city does not allowed to use the motor cars in today.
First of all, for the public entertainment, cinema and the social places (bars and clubs) built beside of port. The street crossed from West to East in the city changed to footpath. In the city, the tram-line is the only way which is connected to city centre and university. The city centre is place where the university students and the citizens can hire the bicycle.
Another change is that new covered market is relocated to the east of city center and on the other side of bars and clubs. The old market changed to the new building and opened the shop. The new shopping center is established at the north-east part of the city.
Also, the old train station changed to the police station and the new train station is bigger than the old one which is placed between university and city center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 257, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'allow'
Suggestion: allow
... from the map is that the city does not allowed to use the motor cars in today. Fir...
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Line 1, column 297, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...allowed to use the motor cars in today. First of all, for the public entertainme...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and the citizens can hire the bicycle. Another change is that new covered marke...
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Line 4, column 165, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ed between university and city center. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66494845361 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46076911054 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520618556701 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4246941857 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2727272727 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.63636363636 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121481648266 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488080033323 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339277310679 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0676327111397 0.15604864568 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179716916354 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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