The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for the development

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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for the development

The diagrams illustrate some planned changes to the center area of the small town of Islip.

Overall, it can be obviously seen that the principal change of the town will be the construction of the ring road around the center area, accompanied with the various newly-built facilities regarding shopping and housing.

Currently, there is a main road, which runs from the west to east area in the map, separating the town center into two parts. In the north part, the row of shops, being locating along the side of main road, will be demolished to make room for the new buildings known as bus station, shopping center and car park, as well as the expansion of the residential area to the north. Meanwhile, the shops, which are in the south side of the main road, will remain unchanged and the number of new housings will be emerged nearly to the park. In addition, only pedestrians will be allowed in the main road.

It can be seen obviously that the dual carriageway erected will connect the school in the west area to the park in the east one, which will be reduced in size to give way for the construction of this new two-lane road . Moreover, it will be more convenient for residents to approach the new building in the town center.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 218, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, regarding, so, well, while, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66063348416 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49418201358 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515837104072 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.0469782157 43.030603864 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.75 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091295382201 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596745840524 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701117446594 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892755925551 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796877362804 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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