The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map below illustrates the changing small city plan called Islip. Two pictures before and after will show how significantly city reconstructed.
The first picture shows the present view of the centre , the main road divides north and south with shops from both sides. South part of road allocates shops, housing estates and park, while north area surrounded by shops and countryside.
After counstruction new dual carriageway will be constructed aroud the Islip which is devided by pedestrians line from east to west side of the city. The new car parking , shopping center and bus stations will be build up at the north. From the south side of pedestrians will be located shops, new housings and restored park.
Additionally school and new apartments will be settled at south part of carriageway. The sad thing is new park size will be undersized.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'maps'.
Suggestion: maps
The given map below illustrates the changing small ci...
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Suggestion: ,
...ure shows the present view of the centre , the main road divides north and south w...
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ea surrounded by shops and countryside. After counstruction new dual carriageway will...
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Suggestion:
...ill be constructed aroud the Islip which is devided by pedestrians line from east...
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Suggestion: ,
...st side of the city. The new car parking , shopping center and bus stations will b...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ians will be located shops, new housings and restored park. Additionally school ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ops, new housings and restored park. Additionally school and new apartments will be settl...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...chool and new apartments will be settled at south part of carriageway. The sad th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05633802817 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74026757052 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647887323944 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1977146434 43.030603864 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7777777778 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7777777778 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828276016426 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0445697143054 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794045355207 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632809098943 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737085532575 0.0819641961636 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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