The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

Essay topics:

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 1990 and 2005.

The maps represent the changes made in the seaside resort called Templeton from 1990 to 2005.
Overall, majority areas were placed for resident housings in 1990 and which changed to the commercial areas by 2005. Most of housings have substituted by buildings and factories. A school and hospital located in North-east of Templeton have remained unchanged.
In 1990, majority parts of Templeton were used for housing purposes. In fact, all the areas in the West side of Templeton were residential areas and in the East, there were fewer houses.
By 2005, most of Templeton became crowded with buildings. The housings that located in West had replaced with tall buildings and a large supermarket had built I the middle of those buildings. Meanwhile, a factory, ferry and airport had newly constructed. A factory and ferry were located in South-West and South-East of Templeton respectively, whereas airport was sited on the North-West of sites, next to the schools. In addition, new railway roads that connect between west and east of areas had also newly built.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 117, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the housings') or simply say ''Most housings''.
Suggestion: Most of the housings; Most housings
...hanged to the commercial areas by 2005. Most of housings have substituted by buildings and facto...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'so', 'whereas', 'while', 'in addition', 'in fact']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283505154639 0.268076937826 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.159793814433 0.116061578633 138% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0670103092784 0.0759168565197 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0257731958763 0.0366838410393 70% => OK
Pronouns: 0.00515463917526 0.0131127313244 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.149484536082 0.155750635184 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0721649484536 0.0379272487307 190% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.72187441925 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0154639175258 0.0210936926555 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0824742268041 0.0948980150116 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0154639175258 0.00967000014798 160% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1064.0 1161.00487805 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.9 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15028901734 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73763899035 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35838150289 0.337110787985 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.312138728324 0.247514529752 126% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.219653179191 0.171178102325 128% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.150289017341 0.112407865282 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72187441925 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554913294798 0.546246751206 102% => OK
Word variations: 47.6218074442 49.3433353143 97% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 8.93414634146 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.7272727273 23.0094962315 68% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5083587471 42.9750493124 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 135.714022679 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 23.0094962315 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.545454545455 0.689975730869 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 46.9411455596 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.64864864865 2.94281807926 90% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400013090378 0.418131533498 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.161856052761 0.181151798455 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0535388308091 0.0850326197045 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.612354817972 0.706616315825 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.18875342615 0.157042692854 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175397302188 0.228904883108 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119699822992 0.108899403657 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.303682712318 0.367819155151 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.101639639415 0.0812612215331 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.306541397277 0.316326947829 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116769097685 0.0921553760075 127% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.08536585366 245% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 8.0 3.02926829268 264% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 7.1512195122 126% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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