The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site

Essay topics:

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

This report derives from two diagrams illustrating the current layout of a commercial area in the town of Norbiton as well as its planned design for expansion.

Generally speaking, the predicted blueprint aim to convert this industrial sector into a residential colony. Establishment of various infrastructure such as a school, a playground, shops etc will take place after renovation.

In the approved plan, all the industries will be removed from the site. A street on the north passing through the river and a road toward northwest will be established. Residence along the north, northwest and east roads will be constructed. Another roundabout on the junction at the south highway will also be built.

By contrast, shops along the previous traffic circle will be created where a medical center will be constructed on the southeast of the new one. The three residential sites and a playground are planned on the both side of the previous highway situated at the east side from the central rotary which will lead to a new school in the future.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d toward northwest will be established. Residence along the north, northwest and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0632183908 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88774088698 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614942528736 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.5694040283 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.8888888889 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107558040339 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481528666684 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652366885553 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710104113698 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494165605449 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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