The picture depicts the information about a science park in 2008 and also shows the changes of same park in contemporary era.
After analyzing, it can be seen clearly that in 2008, the offices on the same place former and latter time. Besides, the reception area is located near woodland but now university hub is built on this area. Many grassland space is empty but now this all grass cut and the research and development area is developed on this place.
The picture further collates that, business units is locate same place in both given time. The car park area is too short now and the cyber security place is wide than former period. On the IT center in 2008, now locate is the new innovation center. The downside now time the station is built for the public.
Overall, research and development or station is built now time also many cycle path and one bus stop is locate in the city for the society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun grassland seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much grassland', 'a good deal of grassland'.
Suggestion: Much grassland; A good deal of grassland
...w university hub is built on this area. Many grassland space is empty but now this all grass c...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'located'.
Suggestion: located
...urther collates that, business units is locate same place in both given time. The car ...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...ty place is wide than former period. On the IT center in 2008, now locate is the new i...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centers'?
Suggestion: centers
...e is wide than former period. On the IT center in 2008, now locate is the new innovati...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovation'.
Suggestion: innovation
...he IT center in 2008, now locate is the new innovation center. The downside now time the stati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 753.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59146341463 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27250952123 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3469748846 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.6666666667 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12408998149 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0590691121307 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990093614183 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106448907531 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130848708709 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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