The bar chart depicts the information about of free time enjoyed by males and females of distinct stages in full time, part time, unemployed, retired and housewives.
After analyzing, it can be seen clearly that in the employed full time job males enjoyed the near about 45 hours and the females enjoyed the less then 40 hours.In contrast, in the part time employed include only women and they enjoyed 40 hours.
The bar chart further collates that in the unemployed field males enjoyed the spare time above the 80 hours and females enjoyed approximately 80 hours. In the retired field, both enjoyed the same amount of time as in the unemployed hours. While men were not interested in the household things so, only housewives were including in this field and they enjoyed the 50 hours.
Overall, retired and unemployed both enjoyed the most spare of time. However, in the employed full time female enjoyed the less free time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 109, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...males and females of distinct stages in full time, part time, unemployed, retired and hou...
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Line 1, column 120, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...emales of distinct stages in full time, part time, unemployed, retired and housewives. ...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...an be seen clearly that in the employed full time job males enjoyed the near about 45 hou...
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Line 3, column 147, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... hours and the females enjoyed the less then 40 hours.In contrast, in the part time ...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: In
... females enjoyed the less then 40 hours.In contrast, in the part time employed inc...
^^
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... less then 40 hours.In contrast, in the part time employed include only women and they en...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ours. In the retired field, both enjoyed the same amount of time as in the unempl...
^^
Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...spare of time. However, in the employed full time female enjoyed the less free time.
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, then, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91772151899 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38274958685 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 76.0 106.607317073 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481012658228 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.6490774498 43.030603864 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199296211089 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114095144352 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359117269628 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142982478202 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0114045096686 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.