The maps illustrate the changes of the stostokeford village that have taken place from 1930 to 2010. Overall, the village had many changes from farmland to the houses and roads, but the river and bridge were still a same.
In the last time at 1930, so many farmlands WERE in the stostokeford village, and the farmland was spread in the village, but at 2010 a farmland was removed at all, and had been changed into houses and roads.
The primary school was developed into two buildings in the east side, and in the western of primary school there had been a change from this a 2 shoop a removed and two shops to building new roads and houses, At same time in the south side of the village, a farmland was changed into a road and houses.
Furthermore, the last changed in the village was in a gardens area in the central village, and the garden had been changed into 4 retirement for 4 houses.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'gardens'' or 'garden's'?
Suggestion: gardens'; garden's
...he last changed in the village was in a gardens area in the central village, and the ga...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42424242424 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36281259927 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.466666666667 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5159292845 43.030603864 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 22.9334400587 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.046884811838 0.215688989381 22% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042455946604 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449353231309 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.037118638713 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379372986844 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.36 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.95 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 40.7170731707 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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