The maps below shows an island, before and after the construction if some tourists facilities.

Essay topics:

The maps below shows an island, before and after the construction if some tourists facilities.

The given pictorial reveals the information about that development of some tourists facilities by before,and after in island.

Overall,it is evident that after the construction of island is more developer takes places that place without cut the plants.

Looking the details, that before the contruction of island land is free from any kind of facilities. Whose are some quantity have plants presence that place. Therefore, sea are presence at the corner of land . However, beach also presence at another side of land like west corver of the land.this all the land cover with 10 meter area.

On flip side, that after the contruction of land this place cover with so many gods. Although, In east side ten building presence,and west side also cover wire six building. As well as, at the center a reception room is available. At North side a restaurant also presence,and on South side a pier available for tourists comfortability.furthermore, this all the process with out forest cut However that the quantity of forest incline from before.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 105, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...nt of some tourists facilities by before,and after in island. Overall,it is evide...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...y before,and after in island. Overall,it is evident that after the construction ...
^^^
Line 5, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the details, that before the contruction of island land is free from any kind of ...
^^
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whose” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd is free from any kind of facilities. Whose are some quantity have plants presence...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ies. Whose are some quantity have plants presence that place. Therefore, sea are ...
^^
Line 5, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., sea are presence at the corner of land . However, beach also presence at another...
^^
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ough, In east side ten building presence,and west side also cover wire six building....
^^^^
Line 7, column 272, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...At North side a restaurant also presence,and on South side a pier available for tour...
^^^^
Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...ility.furthermore, this all the process with out forest cut However that the quantity of...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, look, so, therefore, well, kind of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14705882353 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10971476381 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2497567561 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 5.23603664747 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145910165969 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626846731221 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712094181794 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111350346627 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629690820494 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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