The bar chart below the results of survey conducted by personal department at a major company.the survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers :those age -from 18- 30 an those aged 45-60 and factors affecting their work performance.
The given histogram reveal the information about that should works into some groups by personal department : those ages 18-30 and 45-60 influence on proformance through this essay I shall explore my point of views . It is clear and coherent representation.
Following this,the process of team spirit is 60% data is calibrated . after that, the personal department are maximum amount from team spirit that is 90% takes place.however, relaxed working environment has minor amount of data than personal department.futhermore, the competent boss, job security , colleagues,promotion , job security, money have data 55%,40%,35%,80%,45% and 65% respectively. That all data of 18_35 ages is calibrated into per centum.
On other hand,the ages groups is 45-60 and data also calibrated into per centum.however, the maximum amount of data is calibrated into money department is 65% moreover,the others are in zig zag motion.the. data are 45%, 46% 49%,27% respectively.
Overall, it is the evident that their data of these two ages Same have calibrated department ; team spirit , work environment. regarding this they have been same in every aspects of data finding point of views into per centum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 5.60731707317 285% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58011049724 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50176182779 2.65546596893 132% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596685082873 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.4337600663 43.030603864 215% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184603334759 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079789007009 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664940457674 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127624880216 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521072140266 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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