The bar chart below the results of survey conducted by personal department at a major company.the survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers :those age -from 18- 30 an those aged 45-60 and factors affecting their work performance.
The given histogram reveal the information about that should works into some groups by personal department : those ages 18-30 and 45-60 influence on proformance through this essay I shall explore my point of views . It is clear and coherent representation.
Following this,the process of team spirit is 60% data is calibrated . after that, the personal department are maximum amount from team spirit that is 90% takes place.however, relaxed working environment has minor amount of data than personal department.futhermore, the competent boss, job security , colleagues,promotion , job security, money have data 55%,40%,35%,80%,45% and 65% respectively. That all data of 18_35 ages is calibrated into per centum.
On other hand,the ages groups is 45-60 and data also calibrated into per centum.however, the maximum amount of data is calibrated into money department is 65% moreover,the others are in zig zag motion.the. data are 45%, 46% 49%,27% respectively.
Overall, it is the evident that their data of these two ages Same have calibrated department ; team spirit , work environment. regarding this they have been same in every aspects of data finding point of views into per centum. Moreover these two ages fixed about their data because it is sufficient amount for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51020408163 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42345039669 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581632653061 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 324.0 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 88.6634648545 43.030603864 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 5.23603664747 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18729141943 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.079060015193 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631196892568 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132109845316 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477871130367 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.4140731707 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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