The table below shows the results of a survey of average number of cars per hour using three suburban during working hours instead ten year pollution monitoring program traffic calming was introduced in Harper lane at the beginning of 1999.

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The table below shows the results of a survey of average number of cars per hour using three suburban during working hours instead ten year pollution monitoring program traffic calming was introduced in Harper lane at the beginning of 1999.

The given tabular layout produces the information about that ten years pollution monitoring programme introduce of traffic calming by survey is conducted average number of cars per hour during working hours to into three suburban highways in 1999. It is clear and coherent representation.

Overall, it is evident that the ratio is cars per hour data maximum of great York way rather than all others.

Firstly, the data was celebrating of ten countury as well as three suburban roadways were also used in this process. Moreover, the other one suitable ways used that was traffic calming.however, In 1993- 1997 was data 82%,100%,386%,544%,654% of Harper lane. Although, long lane amount was 400%,450%,600%,800%,638% respectively.

Secondly, another countury of data fluctuate through traffic calming. Because this is the method of slow the traffic rush.furthermore, great York way inclined dramatically into a single row. On moving, other two suburban roadways have data fluctuate either incline or decline. But traffic calming have minor influence on slowing down of highways traffic. Finally, that have data amount progressed from at the end.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59428571429 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41903435466 2.65546596893 129% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.673939582 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 5.23603664747 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336968049682 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101074859732 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130534612539 0.0843802449381 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201723563288 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.153078097918 0.0819641961636 187% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 11.4140731707 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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