The chart below shows The changes that took place in three different areas of crime in new port city centre from 2003-2012

Essay topics:

The chart below shows The changes that took place in three different areas of crime in new port city centre from 2003-2012

The given linear representation reveals the information about that variation take placed by three diff areas to crime into new port city centre during the period 2003-2012.It is clear,and coherent representation.

Overall,it is evident that the crime rate had maximum amount in burglary,and minimum ratio into theft from the personal means to say robbery.

Looking from details, that the content of crime rate that in ten century was available ,and data number of incident.furthmore,that were categories into three section like burglar,car theft,robbery.

Alternately, that In first to three century was been ratio of those categories 500,560,2700,3800 2600,2100.In second place, four to six century were been 600,2100,2400,500,1400,1400.In third place, Seven to ten centuries had data ratio 700,600,1300,1400,1500,2000,2600,2500,2400 Respectively.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...city centre during the period 2003-2012.It is clear,and coherent representation. ...
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...ime rate had maximum amount in burglary,and minimum ratio into theft from the perso...
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...bbery. Looking from details, that the content of crime rate that in ten centur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, third, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 117.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.35042735043 4.92477711251 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28886816799 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.32272119754 2.65546596893 200% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 79.0 106.607317073 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675213675214 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.541455901 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.75 112.824112599 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.25 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 5.23603664747 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 1.69756097561 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193733233341 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122867563218 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108901961286 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122867563218 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108901961286 0.0819641961636 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.1 13.2329268293 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 20.14 11.4140731707 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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