Some people think that social networking have so many benefits other think that not discuss both the option.
With the rise in modernisation A man has transferred his life tremondously.he has progressed from walking a barefooted in the jungle to take the first step on moon.nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and complex as ever for instance this topic asserts that benefits of social networking: or not? through this I shall explore my point of view into follow paragraphs with example and assertion and shape up my opinion.
To begin with, that social networking is play main role in every persons life at presence time . Because through technological advancement takes place.however, there are many unique role into personal to professional life of every one.however , social networking has one common of media . moreover, media is the platform for popular of singer, celebrity ,directors and others. Afterthat, they interfere in every people life for advertising. Whereas, they have professional work progressed without any breaking. Regarding, social networking are commonly by media .
Secondly, the method of celebrity popular also through social networking develop ; Hollywood, Bollywood: movie, songs of singer, celebrity . However they are successful into life. Moreover, celebrity has all work related to network from starting to ending point . Afterthat, they spend all at their profession for development of new categories; songs , serial, movies. Whereas they have successfully by networking department. They can not progressed without networking purpose. Nevertheless, they have been heavily part of everyone of life necessity preparation. For example , A survey conducted by Indian government about social networking for only celebrity profession related because only puts more improvement into networking work as well as technology advancement.
At the end, nevertheless, weighing both the options there is no single answer to this question however I shall explore my point of view into on paragraphs. That social networking spread rapidly into every advancement. Moreover, they have main impact on every people life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.73026315789 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16509430572 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 68.8419040718 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6842105263 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.89473684211 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166512461746 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585393519604 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0387094117239 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105961173925 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333195197807 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.66 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.