Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state

Essay topics:

Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state

Development is necessary for people and nation for basic necessities.In the current time of technological advances , one of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic that should government to pay taxes , beside earn money is hardworking of every people? Through this topic I shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.it is clear and coherent representation.
On one side ,there is a group of people believe that due to politics issues improvements also takes place ; education, medical science, infrastructure extera. However, the government puts a such step for development of nation . whereas, the everyone taken all requirements that given by government to people.moreover , people Keep their needs on the front of union for proper development.
Contrary to this , there is a group of people believe that government to pay tax is beneficial because it has benefits for everyone that give own facilities and requirements fully filled related purpose of paying tax.regardingto this a taxes pay also improve into education level.afterthat, person taken many development about education programs; scholarship as well as so many benefits also gives to students for complete their study without any difficulty faced by them . furthermore , they have improve either in education level or country development also takes place by politics works.for example, the scholarship given by Indian government to poor students that pay not their school fees that is the reason they give scholarship to students .
In conclusion,I shall explore my point of view into on paragraphs that there is no a single conculsion still, that taxes pay is beneficial for people and country development.however, the development incline the status of nation.

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Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pment is necessary for people and nation for basic necessities.In the current tim...
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...is necessary for people and nation for basic necessities.In the current time of technological ad...
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...eople and nation for basic necessities.In the current time of technological advan...
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...opic that should government to pay taxes , beside earn money is hardworking of eve...
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...king of every people? Through this topic I shall explore the same from various as...
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...nd coherent representation. On one side ,there is a group of people believe that ...
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...ts a such step for development of nation . whereas, the everyone taken all requir...
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...ep for development of nation . whereas, the everyone taken all requirements that given by g...
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...opment of nation . whereas, the everyone taken all requirements that given by gov...
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...t given by government to people.moreover , people Keep their needs on the front of...
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...or proper development. Contrary to this , there is a group of people believe that...
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... there is a group of people believe that government to pay tax is beneficial beca...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
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...education level.afterthat, person taken many development about education programs; scholarship a...
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...udy without any difficulty faced by them . furthermore , they have improve either ...
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...y difficulty faced by them . furthermore , they have improve either in education l...
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...faced by them . furthermore , they have improve either in education level or country de...
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...government to poor students that pay not their school fees that is the reason the...
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...reason they give scholarship to students . In conclusion,I shall explore my point...
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...scholarship to students . In conclusion,I shall explore my point of view into on ...
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...f view into on paragraphs that there is no a single conculsion still, that taxes p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, whereas, for example, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51660516605 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30081738486 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.04390333 49.4020404114 235% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 186.875 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.875 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.625 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224838446817 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08295293797 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615569084996 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119163765138 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362862595211 0.056905535591 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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