Some people think that a person improve intellectuals skills better when doing group activities to what extent do you agree

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Some people think that a person improve intellectuals skills better when doing group activities.to what extent do you agree.

Intellectual skills are defined as the method of educate knowledge of person due to it they easily done any method by concentration however ,they asserts that intellectual skills better for work; business, related, about education? I shall explore my point of view through this essay .it is clear and coherent representation.
Intellectual skills are better method of improvements by guessing. However, a person that more educated their intellectual skills has mostly polishing than person that without any knowledge.moreover, through intellectual skills persons have knowledge develop a well successfully person in future by their knowledge.furthermore,these types of persons that more educated they done anything without any difficulty.afterthat, for example, a survey conduct by tribune newspaper due to it person known lot of information of intellectual skills and they have been so many benefits in they life . furthermore they know the importance about intellectual skills
Secondly, intellectual skills are main importance in all persons life . however, their brain more advanced from any other moreover, they has conscious, subconscious parts of brain well worked from any other. Furthermore, they have self consencing .after that , it types of persons are develop more polishing substance.through it they easily done any work due to researches , discovery related to they stream and either they knowledge or understanding.whereas, understanding power of these types of persons are more than others.for example, a survey conducted by Hindustan newspaper about intellectual skills . through it gives the information to all people of intellectual skills as well as understanding .
In summary , due to my point of view into on paragraphs I shall explore my point of view by this topic .there is not single questions of answers by it.howrver ,it caring from person to person . however they depends upon their knowledge , understanding. Furthermore due to it intellectual skills of persons develop a more success person in their life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, in summary, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66557377049 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65312028837 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459016393443 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.788000977 49.4020404114 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.090909091 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170206590253 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937369603006 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748092715827 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124125087051 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400210353749 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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