The chart shows played in Australia in 2003.all figures in percentage.

Essay topics:

The chart shows played in Australia in 2003.all figures in percentage.

The given representation reveals the information about thatsports event playing by Australia during the 2003. The is calibrated in per centum .it is clear,and coherent representation.

Overall it is evident that the maximum ratio of data of boys in six games rather than girls . However, they had only three categories of more ratio but it is neither more than boys nor maximum data.

I can seen from crystal, that all the process depends upon sports event as well as it is involved by nine games. Although, it is divided in two divisions boys, girls.moreover, in the first starting stem had data ratio of girls is more than boys. Moreover, in soccer game in second step had been more ratio of boys from girls. In football, tennis, basketball had data amount 25,7,7 Respectively.
As apart from this, that other four games were data amount differ from first. Futhermore, all the four games like, martial arts,athletics,cricket,and so on. They had been data amount 6, 10, 20 Respectively.finally this all the amount of data to sports players as well as , all the data in all games was differ from each other.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...he 2003. The is calibrated in per centum .it is clear,and coherent representation....
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Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...is calibrated in per centum .it is clear,and coherent representation. Overall it ...
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Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...a of boys in six games rather than girls . However, they had only three categories...
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Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'see' or 'be seen'?
Suggestion: see; be seen
...re than boys nor maximum data. I can seen from crystal, that all the process depe...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eover, in soccer game in second step had been more ratio of boys from girls. In ...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... been more ratio of boys from girls. In football, tennis, basketball had data am...
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Line 6, column 127, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , athletics
...e, all the four games like, martial arts,athletics,cricket,and so on. They had been data a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 145, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...mes like, martial arts,athletics,cricket,and so on. They had been data amount 6, 10,...
^^^^
Line 6, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...unt of data to sports players as well as , all the data in all games was differ fr...
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Line 6, column 303, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'differed'.
Suggestion: differed
...well as , all the data in all games was differ from each other.
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92021276596 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18099010702 2.65546596893 120% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8830643277 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0909090909 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63636363636 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0882979718224 0.215688989381 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356228813435 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584659830227 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0603901449926 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549780290398 0.0819641961636 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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