The filmography below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in the city of Kolkata

Essay topics:

The filmography below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in the city of Kolkata

From linear graph information about that average monthly temperature,and rainfall by Kolkata.It is clear,and coherent representation.

Overall,it is evident that the maximum amount of data from precipitation,and minimum ratio from temperature.

Following this, that this process based upon temperature,and precipitation As well as, the ratio account by monthly.In first step, In January the account of data of that categories is 10,250.nextly, In May the data dramatically inclined at 100,and 300.In june are data ratio 250, 280 Respectively.

On flip side, that In other six month has data amount from first ones. Although, In July, and August have account of data 350,and precipitation Minimum like 28.Futhermore, In September are given data ratio 340,and 26.Subsequently, In October,and November have given account fluctuatly decline like 15,5,2,20, Respectively.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 124.0 196.424390244 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06451612903 4.92477711251 123% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33699396548 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.58296931255 2.65546596893 135% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653225806452 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 9.0 0.482926829268 1864% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.9597608092 43.030603864 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 150.4 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0577423007292 0.215688989381 27% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494300097783 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739967117397 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0532019197886 0.15604864568 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0799766555878 0.0819641961636 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.2329268293 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 61.2550243902 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.16 11.4140731707 159% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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